My website.

pooladdict2 · 22-Jun-2006, 06:21 PM #1

Well, started my personal tech help forum at http://pooladdict2.com, forums are not easy to manage especially during their early days or operation.

Kitch · 22-Jun-2006, 08:12 PM #2

Just a little constructive criticism, you have a few spelling errors there . . .

Technicall should be Technical
Gadjets should be Gadgets
Generall should be General
Bussiness should be Business

pooladdict2 · 22-Jun-2006, 08:27 PM #3

For example?

Kitch · 22-Jun-2006, 08:33 PM #4

Er.. as I said above..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kitch

Just a little constructive criticism, you have a few spelling errors there . . .

Technicall should be Technical
Gadjets should be Gadgets
Generall should be General
Bussiness should be Business

pooladdict2 · 22-Jun-2006, 09:15 PM #5

LOL..i guess everything for me is just double

...thanks for pointing out those errors...v much appreciated.

Kitch · 22-Jun-2006, 09:18 PM #6

No probblemm . . .

kiwiguy · 25-Jun-2006, 04:15 AM #7

Also you may like to review the use of the word "incase".
There is no such word in the context you are using it, it is "in case"

Where you are using incase, the word "if" would probably be better.

tedwinder · 27-Jun-2006, 03:44 AM #8

Hmmmm......its a bit of a dark interface and a bit hard to read, but if you like it that way......

ferrija1 · 27-Jun-2006, 08:35 AM #9

Yeah, can you change the way it looks?

pooladdict2 · 30-Jun-2006, 07:06 AM **#10**

Yesss....i changed the who website...it now looks fantastic. check it out again. http://pooladdict2.com

kiwiguy · 30-Jun-2006, 08:06 AM **#11**

Fix the Incase. As above it's not a real word.

The syntax is also in need of attention.

"this website was only designed using html and css"
Should be "this website was designed using only html and css", if that is what you mean.

"I am" is two words, you have "Iam" throughout the site. Iam is not a word.

"there are various discussion categories available in the forum for discussion"
The first "discussion" is a redundant word.

Try
"there are various categories available in the forum for discussion"

Or
"there are various discussion categories available in the forum"

People shopping for website design are immediately put off by spelling, grammatical and syntax errors. It needs to be 100% perfect to convey the sense of intelligent design capability. If I was wanting a website, I would only seek services from someone that displayed that capability.

The readability and layout is a vast improvent however.

Hope that helps.

tedwinder · 30-Jun-2006, 02:19 PM **#12**

Better, but the main title clashes a bit with the picture.

covert215 · 30-Jun-2006, 04:09 PM **#13**

Just so you know, you have an ad for another webdesign company on your site.

brendandonhu · 30-Jun-2006, 04:14 PM **#14**

You have links to validate the site but its not valid XHTML or CSS.

ferrija1 · 30-Jun-2006, 04:14 PM **#15**

I agree with tedwinder on the clash thing and also at the bottom of the home-page it says "Allrights" instead of "All rights".

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