Poetic Beginnings

ekim68

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Okay, I have to admit that my abilities in poetry are limited. But,
I'm looking for a word that rhymes with flower. I'm writing a song
and thought that maybe you could help..
 
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shower power cower amor tower glower sour...


PS I suck at poems

It might help if you give the theme of the song :)

Carolyn
 

ekim68

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And, the song is about a flower growing from seed, and showing it's beauty and
sharing it's experiences with the elements as it grows. Eventually, it will grow old
and die..
 
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Sounds depressing. (kidding) Not all poems rhyme, though. Don't worry so much about the structure and meter and just write.
 
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his name is coderitr
he is a poem writer
he likes to give advice
because he is so awesomely nice
and whenever someone is writer's blockin'
coderitr comes a'knockin'
cause he's the best at writin' a poem
and sendin' the competition a-home ;)


hold your applause :D
 
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I eat taco, so cheesy
My bowels, so uneasy
I go poo
Just glue

:rolleyes:

I think I should stick to writing short stories. :D
 

ekim68

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Thanks for the links mightyqueenc. I'll be visiting them frequently.
 

ekim68

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i hate ram said:
his name is coderitr
he is a poem writer
he likes to give advice
because he is so awesomely nice
and whenever someone is writer's blockin'
coderitr comes a'knockin'
cause he's the best at writin' a poem
and sendin' the competition a-home ;)


hold your applause :D
Cool....I think I hear a rap to that....Thanks...
Thinking about playing just a bass guitar on it...And T.E.D....
 

ekim68

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And, by the way, the 'flower song' is a comparison, (analogy), with my mom passing away a while back...It's about the positive things you get from your mom, (flower).
 

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